tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4284813757094643990.post3584929875290952683..comments2024-03-09T03:47:52.346-07:00Comments on Naughty Netherworld Press: Invasive Motivations: MFRW Book Hooks 14 October 2020Ornery Owl of Naughty Netherworld Press and Readers Roost http://www.blogger.com/profile/07596105116325246476noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4284813757094643990.post-62361235309849129712020-10-21T21:26:45.449-06:002020-10-21T21:26:45.449-06:00Great beginning, Definitely grabs you interestGreat beginning, Definitely grabs you interestBeverleyBhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17430018506292448221noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4284813757094643990.post-7079541703880921192020-10-16T08:45:06.457-06:002020-10-16T08:45:06.457-06:00Watching movies might work for mimicking speech pa...Watching movies might work for mimicking speech patterns and intonation, but not necessarily serve as a good example for how people converse. I foresee lots mangled meanings ahead.Holly Bargohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15068234010409203549noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4284813757094643990.post-73035721528583171982020-10-14T14:14:45.994-06:002020-10-14T14:14:45.994-06:00I wonder what movie he thinks will model realistic...I wonder what movie he thinks will model realistic dialogue.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4284813757094643990.post-13496203069086626802020-10-14T10:54:04.936-06:002020-10-14T10:54:04.936-06:00Nice premise, and I enjoyed the hook.Nice premise, and I enjoyed the hook.Lyndi Lamonthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08287496036021704884noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4284813757094643990.post-3946288340572822432020-10-14T09:12:41.864-06:002020-10-14T09:12:41.864-06:00Interesting bit. Hopefully the movie worksInteresting bit. Hopefully the movie worksJanet Lane Waltershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15488093917556546485noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4284813757094643990.post-36070274843401720592020-10-14T05:45:14.809-06:002020-10-14T05:45:14.809-06:00Interesting idea. Thanks for sharing.Interesting idea. Thanks for sharing.Tena Stetlerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17728074623573439351noreply@blogger.com