tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4284813757094643990.post2823787886659440041..comments2024-03-09T03:47:52.346-07:00Comments on Naughty Netherworld Press: Weekend Writing Warriors 10 November 2019 (FA, PA, SF)Ornery Owl of Naughty Netherworld Press and Readers Roost http://www.blogger.com/profile/07596105116325246476noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4284813757094643990.post-86565795979139950062019-11-13T09:30:43.023-07:002019-11-13T09:30:43.023-07:00Ah, then I succeeded! Thank you. Ah, then I succeeded! Thank you. Ornery Owl of Naughty Netherworld Press and Readers Roost https://www.blogger.com/profile/07596105116325246476noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4284813757094643990.post-9487665196691716092019-11-13T09:30:27.424-07:002019-11-13T09:30:27.424-07:00Thanks. I enjoyed writing it! Thanks. I enjoyed writing it! Ornery Owl of Naughty Netherworld Press and Readers Roost https://www.blogger.com/profile/07596105116325246476noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4284813757094643990.post-72394012132041875492019-11-13T09:30:07.561-07:002019-11-13T09:30:07.561-07:00Thank you. :-DThank you. :-DOrnery Owl of Naughty Netherworld Press and Readers Roost https://www.blogger.com/profile/07596105116325246476noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4284813757094643990.post-5600475668175116892019-11-13T09:29:54.921-07:002019-11-13T09:29:54.921-07:00Thanks. These two have an easy rapport with each o...Thanks. These two have an easy rapport with each other, so they're fun to write. Ornery Owl of Naughty Netherworld Press and Readers Roost https://www.blogger.com/profile/07596105116325246476noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4284813757094643990.post-49231549601543421072019-11-13T09:29:30.055-07:002019-11-13T09:29:30.055-07:00Thank you. :-)Thank you. :-)Ornery Owl of Naughty Netherworld Press and Readers Roost https://www.blogger.com/profile/07596105116325246476noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4284813757094643990.post-64849911167210529232019-11-13T09:29:15.602-07:002019-11-13T09:29:15.602-07:00Thank you. This story is very different from the o...Thank you. This story is very different from the ones I had been working on. Erotica level: zero. Snark level: turned up to 11. ;-)Ornery Owl of Naughty Netherworld Press and Readers Roost https://www.blogger.com/profile/07596105116325246476noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4284813757094643990.post-43546710519833435752019-11-13T09:28:25.649-07:002019-11-13T09:28:25.649-07:00Yes, his body is very adaptable to almost any atmo...Yes, his body is very adaptable to almost any atmosphere. It would come in handy!Ornery Owl of Naughty Netherworld Press and Readers Roost https://www.blogger.com/profile/07596105116325246476noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4284813757094643990.post-57485697804472342542019-11-10T11:28:06.360-07:002019-11-10T11:28:06.360-07:00Your illustration from Astounding Stories was perf...Your illustration from Astounding Stories was perfect, as the snippet has a certain pulp sci fi feel.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4284813757094643990.post-43184077566362891662019-11-10T09:23:14.993-07:002019-11-10T09:23:14.993-07:00Hee! This dialogue is fabulous and fun! Really nic...Hee! This dialogue is fabulous and fun! Really nicely written snippet! :)Julie Evelyn Joycehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01079016648209704988noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4284813757094643990.post-46173358339539233332019-11-10T09:17:40.121-07:002019-11-10T09:17:40.121-07:00Many elements for an intriguing story, where to ev...Many elements for an intriguing story, where to even start?! Cool stuff...Veronica Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04732940088047026021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4284813757094643990.post-4371492577111658712019-11-10T06:42:21.423-07:002019-11-10T06:42:21.423-07:00Intriguing snippet pulling us deeper into your wor...Intriguing snippet pulling us deeper into your world. Nice voice established for your characters.Nancy Gideonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07493107610530282642noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4284813757094643990.post-49307015996677750972019-11-10T06:36:57.785-07:002019-11-10T06:36:57.785-07:00Totally interesting. Well done!Totally interesting. Well done!Charmaine Gordonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15236373312231763983noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4284813757094643990.post-43335511843918036172019-11-09T19:15:29.935-07:002019-11-09T19:15:29.935-07:00Such an imagination you have! And your descriptive...Such an imagination you have! And your descriptive writing makes the scene immersive for the reader. :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4284813757094643990.post-85306664958926447972019-11-09T18:26:19.118-07:002019-11-09T18:26:19.118-07:00Interesting snippet, especially the idea of a crea...Interesting snippet, especially the idea of a creature with no lungs.Iris Bhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07282988971025667976noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4284813757094643990.post-50012039687193926082019-11-09T17:09:04.394-07:002019-11-09T17:09:04.394-07:00Ketil is a fair bit snarkier than Data. He's t...Ketil is a fair bit snarkier than Data. He's the ghost of a Swedish metal musician who sacrificed himself to the Great Old Ones. His head's a bit of a mess, but his heart's in the right place.Ornery Owl of Naughty Netherworld Press and Readers Roost https://www.blogger.com/profile/07596105116325246476noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4284813757094643990.post-72571997320865790402019-11-09T08:43:20.470-07:002019-11-09T08:43:20.470-07:00I love Ketil's dialogue--reminds me of Data in...I love Ketil's dialogue--reminds me of Data in Star Trek: Next Gen. Or is that the way all the characters talk? Whatever, interesting snippet.Diane Burtonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03754105332297068271noreply@blogger.com