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Weekend Writing Warriors + Snippet Sunday 12 January 2020 (PA, RO)
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What an emotional moment to break into a scene. The dialect helps to set the scene.
ReplyDeleteThank you. I enjoy working with various dialects.
DeleteBeautiful snippet , so well written.
ReplyDeleteThank you. :-)
DeleteA dramatic opening!
ReplyDeleteThanks. :-D
DeleteThe snippet raises many questions in just a few words, which would definitely keep the reader turning the pages!
ReplyDeleteThank you. That's what I'm hoping for!
DeleteWow! Talk about a rude awakening. But is it from a dream or a reality. Either, I'd find terribly upsetting. Nice hook!
ReplyDeleteI have a long history of very realistic, frightening dreams. It tends to bleed over into my writing.
DeleteI'm intrigued. What happened to her baby boys? I like that her husband is doing his best to comfort her. :-)
ReplyDeleteThank you. Gerry and Paul are actually Diane's much younger brothers. She was like a second mother to them. Gerry has early onset dementia.
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